In reply to:
truly incredible
keep trying though
one day you might understand
Chess that's almost a haiku!
Hey you're right Raindance!
How does that go again?
5, 7, 5?
So mine is actually 6, 4, 7 syllables?
Well at least i got the total right.
Perhaps a little rearranging and substitution:
Truly marvelous.
One day you might understand.
Keep trying hard though.
Hmm, not quite as poetic.
How about:
Truly marvelous.
One day you might understand.
Keep concentrating.
Peter? Ray? Ajax? Intrepid? TomT? Bigwill?
Care to take a crack at that one?
I want to see JohnK do haiku.