In reply to:

truly incredible
keep trying though
one day you might understand

Chess that's almost a haiku!



Hey you're right Raindance!
How does that go again?
5, 7, 5?
So mine is actually 6, 4, 7 syllables?
Well at least i got the total right.


Perhaps a little rearranging and substitution:

Truly marvelous.
One day you might understand.
Keep trying hard though.


Hmm, not quite as poetic.
How about:

Truly marvelous.
One day you might understand.
Keep concentrating.


Peter? Ray? Ajax? Intrepid? TomT? Bigwill?
Care to take a crack at that one?
I want to see JohnK do haiku.

Last edited by chesseroo; 03/05/04 09:10 PM.

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