This one wasn't quite as obvious, but I had fun filling in the blanks and coming up with an interpretation. (I'm picturing the elevator scene from Angel Heart, except without the elevator. All-in-all, I think I like it more. (I just read it, I have to let it dwell to be sure.)
But I have to say, both are dark. If your next one is dark we're going to have to ask Axiom to turn off your ability to play any more death metal. (I've always though Axiom is like Tesla; they have back-door access to everything they sell.)
